Thursday, September 4, 2008

new pitch

The southwestern dessert . Summer of 2009 . A challenge is about to take place . The challenge to break the land speed record. Watch as challenge is undertaken. Feel the excitement as if you are watching it on tv or even there yourself . Will the record be broken or will tragedy strike?
Find out in this short film!!

2 comments:

BloodRayne3301 said...

the new pitch sounds good but I think that you could add just a bit more detail. Overall good job should be a good final product.

KipMcSkipster said...

I'm with Tony - the pitch will need a little flavor to grab us, to paint a better picture. Think about camera angles, describing a bit the effects involved (flames, etc).